Friday, October 18, 2013

Journey to publishing update #7

Not as much time today to work on the proof read. 10 pages, 71% completed, 64 to go. Found a couple of sentences with passive verbs. Bad verb! Fixed.

Passive verb example: The meeting was held by the committee last night and a decision was made to  . . . 

Active: The committee met last night and decided to . . . 

Bad verb!

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