European theater versus the Pacific theater - Battle of Midway

While my books are focused in Europe, I have a keen interest in the Pacific war. As I've mentioned before, I read a lot of WWII non-fiction to deepen my knowledge. Additionally, I record and watch many shows on the Military and History channels. 

One recent show was about the Battle of Midway between Admirals Nimitz and Yamamoto. It gave a particularly good account of the battle. It highlighted the Japanese arrogance including their own operational security failures such as mentioning "Midway" in clear radio transmissions prior to the battle.

In what can only be described as the fog of war, or perhaps merely drawing the wrong conclusions from intelligence, the Japanese made terrible command decisions. Among them were events that led to having fueled and armed aircraft parked on the deck far too long, and the Zero air cover being too low (fighting off the Avenger torpedo bombers). This resulted in allowing the Dauntless dive bombers to arrive at the correct altitude. 

In another show, a Dauntless pilot talked about making the first hit on the aft of a carrier deck: the stress of the near-vertical dive, releasing at the right moment to get the bomb to fall where the zig-zagging carrier would be, and then pulling up out of the dive which took all of his strength. 

The final outcome was four carrier losses for the Japanese. This turned out to be the fatal blow for them because they never recovered their naval strength again. The Battle of Midway was when momentum shifted in the Pacific. From that time on, the United States began to win over and over again. This is not to say it was a forgone conclusion, that would be insulting to the sailors and marines and soldiers who died after June 7th.

This Memorial Day, please take a moment to remember those before us who gave everything. 

Why write about WWII? - Part 3

In a previous post I mentioned reading Up Periscope by Robb White, my first war story. Other things that I loved were the TV shows Combat! and 12 O'clock High. Occasionally, on Saturday morning, one of the Kansas City stations showed WWII movies, not all of them with John Wayne, but many were. The land battles, especially those with tanks, were exhilarating, the submarine movies tense, the dogfights incredible. I was always awed by the credits scrolling by at the end thanking the the Department of the Navy, or the US. Army, etc. Wow! They approved this movie! Finally, let's not forget the Rat Patrol!

On top of all that, there were two fabulous comic books about WWII: Sgt. Rock and Sgt. Fury. A few blocks from my house was a used comic book and record shop. Most of my meager weekly allowance was spent there, handed over with glee to the small, dark-haired man behind the counter. If I had to choose between a comic book or a Coke, the comic book won.

We're all products of our past. So is my writing. My fascination with WWII had its genesis as shown above. As I grew older, the fascination didn't abate, I just changed sources. In high school and college I studied some history and military history. In 1977, at age 25, I first read The Rise and Fall of the Third Reich by William L. Shirer. I own the 1960 version, not the abridged version. I have subsequently read it twice more, all 1,242 pages of a view into utter evil. This is a must-read for anyone wanting to learn more about WWII.

It's my goal to provide my readers with several things in each book:

• a fast-paced book with lots of battle action.
• characters you can love (and care what happens to them) and others you can hate and want them to get their just rewards.
• tidbits of facts interwoven within the story.

From the feedback I receive by way of reader emails and reviews, I'm on target.

I'm working on the third Sgt. Dunn novel, which is untitled, but to which I refer as sd3. I didn't set out to recreate Sgt. Rock and Sgt. Fury, and until yesterday, hadn't thought about them much at all, and not during the writing of the books. Sgt. Dunn is clearly defined in my head and on paper, and while I owe part of my WWII fascination to Sgts. Rock and Fury, Sgt. Dunn is his own man. 

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D-Day, June 6, 1944; The Climactic Battle of World War II by Stephen E. Ambrose

D-Day, June 6, 1944; The Climactic Battle of World War II by Stephen E. Ambrose.

I finished reading Ambrose's book on D-Day recently. It's a 600 page account of the lead up to and then the day itself as seen from the perspective of men on the different beaches as well as the airborne units who landed inland to take out specific targets. 

My impression of the men who participated in the invasion is one of utter awe. There are so many stories of bravery and determination. Doing the impossible seemed to be the order of the day and was the norm not the exception. 

Ambrose's storytelling is compelling, as if the topic itself wasn't enough, and his easy style makes the book a terrific read. He doesn't pull any punches and criticizes certain military leaders whenever their decisions or lack of them nearly ruined various operations. On the other hand, earned praise is given, too.

Do yourself a favor and either buy this book or borrow it from the library. While I borrowed it from the library, I'll have to order my own copy to have as a reference.

Now I'm reading A Man Called Intrepid by William Stevenson. The subtitle is: The Incredible WWII Narrative of the Hero Whose Spy Network and Secret Diplomacy Changed the Course of History. The book's person of focus is William Stephenson (what are the odds a man would write a book about another man with a similar name?).

Although I write action thrillers and have no plans for a spy thriller, the insider's view of the intelligence world is fascinating. And I do have a British spy character who appears in the Sgt. Dunn novels, just saying. On page 57 of 497. . . 

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Ronn

Happy New Year!

Wishing you a Happy New Year.

How I plotted Operation Devil's Fire and Behind German Lines

As I mentioned at the end of the post for 26 October 13, I'm going to talk about how I plot my novels. 

When I decided to write my first novel, Operation Devil's Fire, I knew I had only a vague understanding of plotting. I bought a copy of Ken Follet's Hornet Flight, read it, then sat down and plotted it using Excel. I entered the name of the point of view (POV) character and a one-sentence description of the chapter. Next, using Excel's formulas, I counted the number of times each character appeared and calculated the percentage of "screen time" they each had. Side note: I have no idea how Mr. Follet writes his books.

For my next step, I bought two books on writing:

The Marshall Plan for Novel Writing

and the companion workbook

The Marshall Plan Workbook

I read them both cover to cover and still have them in my home library. Mr. Marshall laid out a logical approach to plotting, which I converted to Excel using a pattern of appearances by each of my POV characters. I saved the file as ODF Story Plan.xls and used that same naming convention for my latest book, Behind German Lines BGL Story Plan.xls.

Because my books are thrillers, my chapters tend to get my characters in trouble, then end, switching POV, often to the bad guys whose chapter then ends with a new threat that the reader knows about but the main character doesn't. This doesn't occur all the time, but I use when needed. Remember, the writer wants the reader to worry about the characters and wonder how in the world he or she is going to get out this jam.

Using Marshall's general POV pattern, but modifying it for MY story, I ended up with a spreadsheet whose POV column looked like this. Note that some chapters are listed more than once - this is due to perhaps just moving them from one place to another in the same chapter.

Chapter	VP Char
1	Marston
2	Dunn
2	Dunn
3	Miller
4	Dunn
4	Dunn
5	German
5	German
5	German
6	Miller
7	Churchill
7	Dunn
8	Churchill
8	Dunn
8	Churchill
9	Dunn
9	Dunn
9	Dunn
10	Dunn
10	Dunn
10	Madeline
10	Dunn
10	Madeline
10	Dunn
10	German
11	Dunn
11	German
11	Cross
12	Pamela
12	Donovan
12	FDR
13	Dunn
13	Cross
13	German
14	Marston
15	Dunn
15	Cross
15	Dunn
16	Dunn
17	German
18	Marston
19	Dunn
20	Miller
20	Miller
21	Dunn
22	Miller
23	Dunn
24	German
25	German
26	Lawson
27	FDR
28	German
28	German
29	German
30	Dunn
31	German
32	Marston
33	Dunn
33	Miller
34	Saunders
35	German
36	Dunn
37	Miller
38	German
38	Dunn
38	German
39	Dunn
40	Miller
41	Dunn
42	Miller
43	German
44	Churchill
45	Dunn
46	Churchill
46	German
46	Churchill
47	Dunn
48	Miller
48	Miller
49	Claire
50	Pamela
51	Dunn
52	FDR
53	Dunn
53	German
54	Dunn
55	Madeline
55	German
56	Dunn
57	German
57	Dunn
57	Dunn
57	Dunn
57	Dunn
58	Dunn
59	Dunn
60	German
61	Dunn
62	Churchill
63	Dunn
64	Dunn

Here's how each character's appearances add up as a percent of the total chapters.

POV	%
Dunn	42%
German	22%
Miller	11%
Churchill	7%
Marston	4%
FDR	3%
Madeline	3%
Pamela	2%
Cross	2%
Donovan	1%
Saunders	1%
Lawson	1%
Claire	1%
Total	100%

My main characters in bold, take up 82% of the total, with the minor characters taking the rest. 

In the new novel there are only 5 POVs. Each story has different needs.

The key advice I can give you is: if you decide to plot your book in a similar fashion, always remember that the story is the boss. Don't always put a POV chapter in a certain place just because the spreadsheet pattern says to; you have to adjust all the time so the story stays tight, tense, and true.

Help your readers come to love your characters, care about whether they survive, and cheer for them when they do. 

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Starting today, I'm going to post the name of the book I'm currently reading, with the Amazon link if there is one.

D-Day, June 6, 1944; The Climactic Battle of World War II by Stephen E. Ambrose.

On page 257 of 583.

Pearl Harbor - Sunday, December 7, 1941

At 7:48 AM Hawaiian time, the Imperial Japanese Navy attacked the United States Navy docked in Pearl Harbor.

Please take a moment to remember those who died.

Here are some good links:

President Roosevelt's speech - youtube

http://www.nps.gov/valr/index.htm

http://www.history.com/topics/pearl-harbor

http://www.history.navy.mil/photos/events/wwii-pac/pearlhbr/pearlhbr.htm

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Attack_on_Pearl_Harbor

A worthwhile movie. Some criticize it for the love story, but it's a good depiction of the events leading up to and then the attack itself.

http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0213149/

Happy Thanksgiving!

Wishing you and your family a safe and Happy Thanksgiving.

Ronn